Thursday, November 6, 2014
No! I didn't say gender-bending.
My genre-bending adventure is about to begin. I just turned the second edit/pass of my latest novel into my publisher, White Whisker Books. I'm calling this my genre-bending adventure because it was apparent early on in the writing process that this book was not going to fit squarely into any one hole.
I started out with two ideas. I wanted to do something about my older brother in which my older brother was a ghost. No, my older brother is not dead, but growing up he was someone I very much looked up to, and I wanted to write about that from a young boy's perspective, a young boy needing to finish growing up without the steady hand of a brother he looked up to. I also knew I wanted to do something like The Green Mile. What I mean by that is, I didn't want to hit horror over the head. I wanted my book to be more wonder--John Coffey in The Green Mile--than horror. To this, I added a delightful romance that winds up driving the entire story. Oh yes, and there's a monster. So I've got a thirteen year-old boy (genre, YA), a ghost with a special power (genre, Supernatural), a sweet romance (genre, Romance), the last 100 pages are a thrill ride (genre, Thriller), oh, and the monster (genre, Horror).
For the past few months I've called it a romantic-horror-thriller. I like that, however, the first editor called it a paranormal coming of age story. Sheesh! Confusing.
The truth is, these labels only matter in marketing. You want to make sure your book gets into the hands of folks who will appreciate it. If someone is looking for pure horror they may give my book a bad review. Reviews are all important, and early reviews are the most important, so I want to make sure the book is appealing to the right crowd early on.
I did a little research on my favorite genre-bending novel, The Time Traveler's Wife (Sci-fi/ romance), and discovered most publisher's didn't want to touch the book because it was difficult to pigeon-hole. That didn't keep it from becoming a bestseller as well as a movie. On Goodreads, I did notice from the reviews that many of the reviewers were fans of romantic novels.
Of course, The Time Traveler's Wife is about adults and my book is about teenagers. Young love might not be as appealing as adult love. At any rate, now that I've turned it in, I't's got me thinking. Also, while I love the Wattpad cover (the book premiered last June as a Wattpad WIP. Click on the link to check it out) it's probably the wrong cover for romance and supernatural. What do you think? Does it matter? I should probably come up with a new title, too, huh? My publisher already suggested that. What do you think?
I welcome comments from anyone, whether you've written a genre-bender or not. I'd love to hear from readers as well as writers. If you have a moment, please leave your thoughts.
Anyway, here we go. I'll keep you posted as I lumber toward publication.
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Friday, October 31, 2014
This is a guest post written by my horror writing alter ego, Sal Conte (featured in photo).
I’ve been noticing a trend among less seasoned writers of scary stories. Too many of them are in a hurry to show you how scary they can be. They’re anxious to get to the horror. I understand this quite well. As writers of scary stuff, the horror is our favorite part. But allow me to drop a little knowledge I received from one Stephen King. It was something I read a long time ago in his book Danse Macabre. I need to paraphrase here because, like I said, I read it a long time ago, before my brain cells were destroyed by wine, women, and the ravages of time.
Here’s what he said: To make something really scary, you need to slowly build the world the horror takes place in. You build your world out of the ordinary, the mundane. It’s a world that the reader recognizes. It’s very much like his own world. Then, into this very ordinary world comes the spooky stuff.
At the risk of using my own work as an example, in my current Work In Progress on Wattpad entitled, The Memory Giver, I spend quite a bit of time in the prologue talking about young Marty’s sister leaving him at home alone for the first time. We hear a little bit about Marty’s absentee father, that the family was recently homeless, and that Allison, his sister, is desperate to have a friend. All normal stuff. It’s into this very recognizable world that I introduce my reader to a glimpse of horror.
Readers on Wattpad have been responding big time to this story, so I must be doing something right. It’s because I took my time in world building before I (as Stephen King said in Danse Macabre) brought the monster out of the closet (his words, not mine). So when writing tales of horror, take your time in world building before you introduce the scary stuff. Do this well enough, and you just may be the next great scary story teller.
If you’d like to have a look at the prologue of our horror WIP on Wattpad, go HERE. It’s free.
Thanks, E, for sharing the spotlight with me.
Wednesday, October 29, 2014
A few weeks back I posted here about a recent phenomenon in Hollywood where novelists are now being allowed to write the screenplays of their novels. In the past, this was unheard of as Hollywood always hired one of their own--often to disastrous results. In the earlier post I encouraged writers to take a look at screenwriting and into adapting their own novels for the screen. You can find that earlier post HERE. Today I'm going to post briefly on what to do once you have a polished screen adaptation of your novel in your hands.
This is the hard part because there are no set rules to follow on breaking into Hollywood. But there are three roads I want to tell you about to start you on your journey. The first are services like Ink Tip who connect producers with screenplays. Before writing this post I did a bit of research on Ink Tip and found a few bad reviews. So buyer beware. As a producer, I have used Ink Tip and found them to be quite professional. I also found this very informative THREAD where a writer asks about Ink Tip and gets some very good advice for writers looking to break in. Please check it out.
The second place to get your screenplays noticed is through contests like Script Pipeline. I've never submitted to them and don't know anyone who has, so I'm not endorsing them here, but when I looked them up they seemed reputable. But again, buyer beware. Do your own research. There are lots of contests and lots of scam artists out there. Take your time in finding one you think works for you.
The third and final way to go are agents. A good agent is hard to find, hard to reach, and even harder to get to represent you. Here is an interview with some of Hollywood's top literary agents who represent books: TOP AGENTS. You may not be able to get to one of them, but if you read this at least you'll know who they are and what they're looking for. That's a good place to start.
I started working in Hollywood in the 80s. I didn't know anyone when I got here, didn't have a soul to give me a leg up. I knocked on doors--lots of them--and eventually someone answered. In the mean time, I was writing and rewriting and polishing my material. If you're sincerely interested in breaking in and seeing your book on the screen, I suggest you do the same.
Hollywood has a ravenous appetite for books, and in today's market many novelists are adapting their own works for the screen. New writers are being discovered everyday. The next one could be you. Often the books Hollywood chooses are not bestsellers, so don't let that be a deterrent. If you'd like to see your book on the screen, start down that road now: Writing, refining, researching and knocking on doors.
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Thursday, October 23, 2014
Those who know me know I’ve been on the 'build your email list' bandwagon for some time now. As the market becomes more cluttered with indie writers writing more and more books, the marketing of our books is going to get harder and harder. Our mailing lists of go-to readers is what can keep us in the game. As I discovered over the past few years, building this potent list is not easy. It won’t happen overnight. I’ve been at it for over a year now and my list is still quite small. My mailing list, however, is like the little engine that could.
I think I can,
I think I can,
I know I can,
I KNOW I can!
My mailing list is not very deep, but it is powerful. Here’s a recent story that demonstrates the power of my list. I’d been posting chapters of my latest WIP, The Memory Giver, on Wattpad all summer long. In early September, to my delightful surprise, the book was featured by Wattpad and (like with Amazon) I noticed I had a ranking. Just like with Amazon, the lower your ranking the more visible your book becomes to new readers. The goal, like on Amazon, is to get to #1. The day my book appeared on the list it ranked just above #500 in horror. Because of the feature, the ranking began to drop. One day it got as low as #18.
With Amazon your ranking is based on sales, but since Wattpad is free, I couldn’t determine what affected my ranking. I did some research and discovered to improve your ranking readers must “star” the chapters they read if they like them. The more stars you can get in a short period of time, the lower your ranking becomes.
After the first two weeks of my feature my ranking began to climb. It was still pretty good, hovering just under 100, but I wondered if my fans on my mailing list could help get the ranking down and keep it down a little longer. So on Sunday October 19th, I emailed my frans on my list and told them I was looking for beta readers for my latest work and what I needed them to do to become one--read the chapters on Wattpad and star the ones they enjoyed. They acted swiftly. On October 21st The Memory Giver dropped to #14 on the list. Today, two days later, it’s still #15.
I have a regular mailing list with 100s of names, but it’s just a list because I didn't realize how important my list could be when I started it. A little over a year ago I started another list, my special list. I only have a handful of followers on my special list, but look at the power they pack. Imagine if I had hundreds or thousands of these types of followers. I’ve now rededicated myself to adding quality names to my special list. Eventually, I’ll phase out the other list. Imagine if we each had 10,000 loyal followers who bought everything we wrote; we’d be doing pretty well, wouldn't we? Getting there is not going to happen overnight. You need to build a list of frans (friend + fan = fran) who listen when you talk to them. You do this one name (one fran) at a time.
By the way, I sent a similar email to those on my regular list. Two people (out of 400) responded. That list will definitely be phased out. We don’t just want names on our mailing lists, we want friends who we can talk to. Like I said, building this list won’t be easy, but in a year or two, it will be worth it. So start now to build your mailing list of special frans one name at a time.
In a future post I’ll tell you how I'm going about building my special list. In the meantime, if you’d like to read chapters of the (as of today) #15 horror novel on Wattpad, The Memory Giver (it’s free) Go here: THE MEMORY GIVER. If you do stop by, please remember to “star” the chapters you enjoyed. Thank you.
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Friday, October 17, 2014
There’s a new phenomenon sweeping the Hollywood landscape. Authors are being allowed to adapt their own works for the screen. For most of my career this has not been the norm. Typically, the studio would purchase the rights to your book and then bring in a screenwriter or two to “adapt” it—often to disastrous results, definitely to unnerving results for the author. Just ask Stephen King about The Lawnmower Man.
Recently, however, there seems to be a change in the air. Authors are being allowed to write the screenplays for their works, and some of the results have been stunning: Gillian Flynn wrote the movie adaptation of her novel, Gone Girl, Dennis Lehane adapted his short story The Drop, and Johnathan Tropper wrote This Is Where I Leave You. All three movies have received good notices from the critics.
With these successes, Hollywood will be more open to authors penning their novels for the screen. So what are you waiting for? Now is the perfect time for independent authors to start working on their screenplays.
As an author who’s spent most of my career writing for TV and film, I can tell you writing a screenplay is a very different animal than writing a novel. Animal? Heck, it might not even be considered the same species. If you haven’t written for the screen before it’s going to take some training, but if you’re a self-published or independent author, chances are you’re no stranger to training and learning new skills.
Take a screenwriting class, or buy a book on screenwriting. There are lots of good books on screenwriting out there. I trained so long ago I don’t want to steer you wrong on what to read so ask around. I will tell you Linda Seeger’s Making A Good Script Great was a good book for me, and helped me immensely with the writing and rewrite of the Academy Award nominated short film, Cadillac Dreams.
You know you’ve always wanted to see your book on the screen. It’s time to get to work on your screenplay. In a future post I’ll give you a few tips on what to do once your screenplay has been completed.
Happy Reading – Happy Writing
You can read more about Flynn, Lehane and Tropper in this Variety article.
Thursday, September 18, 2014
They say write what you know. This doesn’t mean you can’t write about unicorns because you don’t know one. By the way, I do know a few unicorns and if you want to write about one I’ll introduce you. But I digress. What this means to me is write about people you understand; write about emotions you understand and can relate to. This rule is not meant to be taken literally. It does not mean to write about J who borrowed your favorite jacket and then sold it for drug money. Sure, you can write about this literally, but what’s more interesting is to write about the person’s emotional state when they borrowed your jacket knowing they never planned to give it back. Write about your emotional state when you discover you’ve been duped by a friend. This is what I believe is meant by writing what you know.
With my latest WIP, however, I’ve seemingly moved backwards and gone somewhat to the literal stage. While The Memory Giver is a ghost story, at its heart it’s about the unlikely romance of a pre-teen boy and girl. Anyone who’s seen my WIP on Wattpad (If you’re interested GO HERE) knows chapter one begins when a girl rescues a boy from some bullies. This really happened to me--literally. When I was in the eighth grade, I really did get rescued (in a sense) by a girl.
Susan was new to the neighborhood, but had quickly earned a reputation for herself as one of the girls not to be messed with. Not by girls. Not by boys. Not by teachers. Susan was the first girl I knew who smoked. I’d often see her sitting on her stoop, a cigarette dangling from her lip like a card shark, as she talked a-mile-a-minute. The way that cigarette could hang there without dropping off was a fascination to me. While other young girls who smoked put out their cigarettes before they got into the neighborhood, Susan smoked right in front of her own apartment building.
She had scars on her arms, and one on her upper lip from fighting, I guess. I’d never seen Susan in a fight, but I’d heard about her beating up boys. Her prowess only added to her mystique. Beneath the scowl and the scars and the cloud of smoke, Susan was cute. She was no raving beauty, but who was back then.
I was in the accelerated learning program, and somehow Susan was placed in my class. She didn’t look like she belonged there, but no one was going to question her presence. One day in home room three of the popular boys were teasing me. I can’t remember why. I’d known these guys since 6th grade.
“Stop messin’ with my boyfriend,” Susan said. She seemed dead serious.
The entire class stopped what they were doing and looked at her. Susan was a girl of a few words. She’d had very little social interaction with the class until then.
“Who? Eric?” one of the boys said, as if she’d just told a joke.
Susan stood up.“You got a problem with that?”
Needless to say, no one had a problem with me being Susan’s boyfriend. The teasing stopped. I couldn’t figure out why she did it, why she came to my rescue. Even though I was glad the teasing stopped, it was embarrassing having a girl stand up for me. Then, to my surprise, after school, Susan appeared by my side.
“Hi, boyfriend,” she said with a big smile.
“Were you leaving without me? Aren’t you going to walk me home?”
Things went back to normal after a few days, but I never forgot Susan, and I used this incident as a springboard for my latest.
This writing from my past is actually a first for me. I can’t say I’m growing as a writer, although I can say my material is getting closer to home. In part II of this post I’ll talk about my older brother, the other person my latest is about.
Write what you know means to write about the people and emotions you understand enough to explore. You can also write about amusing or interesting situations you’ve been in. Just don’t take the adage too literally and start writing about you and your three friends in high school who all like the same boy. That may be interesting to you, but it will bore us readers to tears. Use the adage judiciously.
Are you writing what you know? I’d like to know.
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Friday, September 12, 2014
Todya I received some exciting news. Wattpad has selected my WIP The Memory Giver as one of their featured books this month starting today 9/12. The book will be on their featured book list for the next several months. That means that during that time my new work will be exposed to many more readers. How cool is that?
If you don't know about Wattpad, it's a community of readers and writers where we authors can expose our works or as in my case, works in progress to readers to get their opinion and/or approval. So far the response to The Memory Giver has been outstanding which is why I believe It's been chosen. This is a great honor for me, as it allows new readers to become fans of my work, so...
If you're not aware of The Memory Giver, my latest novel in progress, it's a romantic horror thriller. If you'd like to know more about it please click here for The Memory Giver page on my website. If you'd like to shoot on over to Wattpad and start reading go here: TMG Wattpad. If you sign up to follow me on Wattpad you can receive the latest chapters or updates right in your mailbox. If you're a fan I'm telling you it's my best book yet. The language and subject matter are a bit stronger than my earlier books. That's because I'm writing it with my horror writing alter-ego, Sal Conte. And Sal has a foul mouth. Seriously.
When you read it, please leave comments. Those who leave several will be chosen as beta readers when the entire novel is ready for publication. So, there's a reward for commenting. I believe the book will be coming out in December or January. Leave comments and you'll be the first to get a copy in your hands.
That's all for now. I hope everyone had an awesome summer. I did. I've been writing The Memory Giver.
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